Do you think car is good for our life?
About this issue is really depends on person, In my opinion car is really convenient our life, although it's make a lots of pollution and short of energy. Then this situation is could be controled and changed, so let me talk some advantage of car using!
Firstly, if you own a car, when wether get bad. You don't have to be running in the rain, then you get a comfortable seat and lovely air condition. Then if you have a car, you can go wherever and whenever you want to go, not thing could trap your plan. so it is so nice to our daily life.
Secondly, if you have a good car, it is a fantastic thing, it means you could show off to your friends and make them jealous!(hah~~I am joking)
But be honest, car really makes our life better, makes long distance, won't take so long, and helps us for daily transporting, so I think, car is good for our life and it will be hard without it.
posted by Allen @ 6:58 PM
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About this issue is really depends on person,
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In my opinion car is really convenient our life, although it's make a lots of pollution and short of energy.
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Then this situation is could be controled and changed, so let me talk some advantage of car using!
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Firstly, if you own a car, when wether get bad. You don't have to be running in the rain, then you get a comfortable seat and lovely air condition.
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Then if you have a car, you can go wherever and whenever you want to go, not thing could trap your plan. so it is so nice to our daily life.
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Secondly, if you have a good car, it is a fantastic thing, it means you could show off to your friends and make them jealous!(hah~~I am joking)
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But be honest, car really makes our life better, makes long distance, won't take so long, and helps us for daily transporting, so I think, car is good for our life and it will be hard without it.
-->In summary, cars really make our ... They shorten the distance and help...
But be honest, car really makes our life better, makes long distance, won't take so long, and helps us for daily transporting, so I think, car is good for our life and it will be hard without it.
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