Describe a place
That is one of the most famous resort in world, it is famous, there is a monster lives in that lake, named nessie, and it is located in northen Scotland in UK.
posted by Allen @ 12:14 AM
That is one of the most famous resort in world, it is famous, there is a monster lives in that lake, named nessie, and it is located in northen Scotland in UK.
posted by Allen @ 12:14 AM
1 Comments:
Hmmm...this is pretty brief and short...
If you have more time, maybe you can extend the writing into a proper paragraph or essay.
That is one of the most famous resort in world, it is famous, there is a monster lives in that lake, named nessie, and it is located in northen Scotland in UK.
-->it is famous for the legendary monster living in ...
-->pay attention to the use of comma. Readers may have difficulties reading a very long sentence with many commas. Use periods (.) at the proper so readers can have a break.
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