A good year!
2005-2006 that was a brilliant year in my life! Last year I extremely wanted to go abroad to study English, so I did all the efforts, I was looking for any posible way to go out with limited budget. That time I was doing my National Service in a elementary school in Tainan city, because I was working there, so I knew a lots of friends and coworker in the school. I always believe if you treat people well, that sometimes you might can get some thing unexpectly from them. When I ran out all of my ideas, and still not found a way to go out abroad, almost gave up! Then some good news just popped in and let me find a hope again.
What happened ? Let me tell you the story! When I almost gave up to go out abroad, there was a chance occurred! One of my colleague told me, there was a experience program is progressing. That program is helping youg people experience the different part of life, you could work as a volunteer sent to different country. You could go to other Asia countries , South America even though European countries Yet I would like to study English and I wanted to to Europe, so I decided to go to UK for my voluntary working life last year.
Last year I got all my luggages ready and flew to UK by myself, that was so exciting! That time was my second time travel abroad, then I did not know the procedure very well, yet it was my first time going abroad alone, all the things I had to do by myself, was so unconvenient. for example when I wanted go to toilet, I had to take my luggage with my all the time, no one could keep an eye on my luggage for me. Fortunately, the toilet was big enough to let me put all my stuff in one room. Then I had to figure out where to catch my next flight and how to get there! After all the adventures, finally I arrived Edinburgh safely, thank god!!
posted by Allen @ 12:21 AM
1 Comments:
Well done! Do you like the weather in the UK? Do you like Edinburgh? It's a big city, but it is always raining in the afternoon!
Last year I extremely wanted to go abroad to study English, so I did all the efforts, I was looking for any posible way to go out with limited budget.
-->run-on sentence
because I was working there, so I knew a lots of friends and coworker in the school.
-->because...so-->just choose one
-->coworkers
I always believe if you treat people well, that sometimes you might can get some thing unexpectly from them.
-->delete 'that'
-->unexpectedly
still not found a way to go out abroad, almost gave up-->still could not find...go abroad, I almost...
there was a chance occurred!
-->a chance appeared
One of my colleague -->colleagues
there was a experience program is progressing
-->there was an ... in progress(Delete 'is progressing')
That program is helping youg people experience the different part of life, you could work as a volunteer sent to different country.
-->run-on sentence
You could go to other Asia countries , South America even though European countries
-->Asian...even European...
luggages -->luggage (uncountable)
Last year I got all my luggages ready and flew to UK by myself, that was so exciting!-->run-on
That time was my second time travel abroad, then I did not know the procedure very well, yet it was my first time going abroad alone, all the things I had to do by myself, was so unconvenient.
-->my second time travelling...
-->I had to do all the things by myself, which was so inconvenient.
-->This sentence is a bit long,
for example when I wanted go to toilet, I had to take my luggage with my all the time, no one could keep an eye on my luggage for me.
-->For...; no one could...
get ther-->get there
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