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Wednesday, November 29, 2006

The disadvatages of my motorbike

What I am saying, is a advice for people who want to buy the same type of motorbike as I did. Two years ago, there was a trend of driving old fasion motorbike, so there were some people collecting all different kind of old motorbikes and cars to fix it, to refit it. Then after all works done , they sell all the motors to young people or whoever likes it!

About two years ago, I bought a quite fashionable motorbike, that was a very shining, petrol saving and very cool motorbike. That was a good time to drive my motorbike, lots friends of mine were extremly curious about my motorbike, and desperate to borrow my motorbike. Of course I did satisfied all their curiousness.

My motorbike is a manual kind, every time you want to drive forward, you have to pull the cluth up and step down the gear, then you just can drive. Becaouse of it is manual, so I can save a half as automatic one, that helped me save quite lot of money which is very important.

Two years passed, I still driving my manual motorbike everyday. altough it is still working and not big problem now, but small problems come one by one. Lots of small pieces are broken, light bulbs ,breaks and some part of engine, even now , it is not as petrol saving as it was.

I am giving a advise to whom wants to buy old fashion motorbike, although the figure of my motorbike is really nice, but when the motorbike getting older, problem would come out one by one, for now, I can not drive and park my motorbike in the raining day, and I can not put my stuff in the motorbike, and the most important thing is the breaks is damaged day by day.So it is not very practical, especailly in the raining day. If you read my words seriously, then take my advice, do not buy so old cars or motorbikes, then you could save lot of time and energy to take care your motorbike.

Wednesday, November 01, 2006

Topic sentence-The disadvantage of my motorbike

What I am talking about is the disadvantage of my motorbike, why I am saying so? That's because,it is pity I can not ride it in raining day. That will make my motorbike be broken down, and can not get start again. Another point is, it is quite inconvenience that every time I ride it, there is not place to put my stuff in or hang on the motorbike. So if you want to buy a new motorbike? Take my advice, do not buy the same motorbike as I am riding now!